Outline of Story


1. Background on Dark Elf enchanter Kaaldar, background on High Elf Chloe, (magician?)

2. High Elf at EC, 'wanting to buy crystaline belt'. feeling a magical sense....

Battle in which K and C meet, C overwhelmed by a particularily nasty Orc, K stopping to help
3. Dare to approach?

4. The initial Meeting.

('you smell funny, nice but funny' Ranger has told Chloe he uses smell to track. Wood Elves woody and earthy, Hi Elves like cinnamon, Humans, Barbarians and Erudites very strong...

aint' smelled Gnomes or Inkies...

discussion of cities... Kaaldars admission he has only been to one...

5.The Kiss (Ear pinch....yes, pointy!

6> The second kiss...(hooked!, dis-illusioning whilst...)

7. RED eyes????

8. 3rd kiss

9. what now?

10. sneaking into Neriak

11. super hooked...(lots of hot sex!)

12. A way to marry

13. The test..."what a beautiful rage!"

14. Three applications

The First Step
A Mysterious Puzzle
A Piece of the Puzzle
That Lovely Smile

15. Calls From Momma

'never felt so good'

Advice From Gramma

16. Momma wants Chloe in Felwithe

17. the Marriage

18. Meeting with Momma near lesser Faydark,

19. The Discovery

''Why did you do that to the beautiful face Tunare gave you?"

20. ''For Love''

21. Kaaldar steps out of hiding

Meeting with Momma and rest of Family

22. Who really is about hate?

(Kaaldar 'finds his fury' and 'becomes a man')
23. Gypsy words are heard again in Momma's mind "This child is not yours"

24. Revelation! Chloe's father not the High Elf Momma has married, but the Wood Elf bard she played with whilst 'the general' was off at war. But WAS that really a Wood Elf bard? She'd not seen any evidence of spellcasting songs.

The light dawns. he and his gyspy mother were both Dark Elf enchanters! (''The wildness is within you'').

25. Embrace of Reconciliation

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